Fishing
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On 27th of April 2007.
It was a cloudy day just like a gray carpet that hadn't been clean for months and years.
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We went to mekarsari. I loved fishing as much as swimming in the sea. The fish wiggled, flipped and swirled like a green, crazy frog.
When I tried to catch one, I thought it will bite me so I didn't get even one! The fish was slippery like a soap that we wash with our hands. It smelled like a rotten egg. I felt bad because I didn't get any fish.
Later Vanessa gave me one fish because I didn't have any. The fish looked like a blue frog. I felt great because Vannesa gave me one fish and because this is the first time I went fishing.
3 Comments:
Ju hee your score is..... 9/10 good job you tried hard. I gave you this score because I think you need to put more descriptive words.
Your score is 10\15 because you have to use more comparisons....
grace p
Juhee your score is 9/10 because you need to be more descriptive.
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